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Hope; a question. (Redeem Me)
Contributed by
sweetdreamsaremadeofthis
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Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 01:22:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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desecrated hollow hematite eyes
sadistic desire dances upon the
edge of a knife. smiling as I stagger
Towards slaughter. The onslaught of
thousands painting melodies
in flux like a reddened tide of which
my heart has sunken from birth.
Who knew that what was hollow
what was blind and black and out of breath could
so Redeem Me?
It is you, the angel of death incarnate, the angel
of black redemption.
The Opressor. The Master.
Of blood-tinted fantasies
surpassing all understanding I find solace
in a hopeless flux.
The paradox of love and innocence
pay homage to a dream deferred--
pay homage to the
spiraling hellbound generations.
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Re: Hope; a question. (Redeem Me)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 03:12:45 PM AEST
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| wow this was very good...when i read it I see someone whos killed a lot of people and now is seeing what they've done and so they are commiting suicide. that's what i get from it. very interesting poem... |
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