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Torn Apart
Contributed by
princess_of_pain
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Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 04:58:44 PM in AEST
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when i got the phone call
him saying goodbye
i held back my saddness
held back my cries
my release was unspoken
because tears dont always work
hiding behind smiles and giggles and smirks
my hurt on the inside numbed
by another strong pain
but my cover, un-broken
as i played my own game
no one really knows
how i got over him
and no one really knows
why i have scars on my skin
im the only one who knows
those scars represent my heart
battered and beaten and completely torn apart
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Re: Torn Apart
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by JenJen on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 05:45:46 PM AEST
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such a deep meaningful poem, brought tears to my eyes. I hope you get over this guy and find a way to prevent the pain of a broken heart and the cut of a sharp object. If you ever need to take...im always here to lend a hand!
Things will improve in time
Luv
Jen
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Re: Torn Apart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 05:48:07 PM AEST
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Very sad. The poem reads well. Needles and Knives and razors, I guess I am blessed by those three things, treat them very carefully, so I do not get stuck, cut or sliced. You must keep very, very busy in life, there are classes that can help you to cope, have right thinking. Guard your heart. Hugs.. Raquel Leah ... always praying for those who are sick and afflicted and who need strong love from Him above..
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Re: Torn Apart
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by kiza on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 07:08:23 PM AEST
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| you dont sound happy.but it was a realy good poem,it realy made me think about stuff in a diffrent way. |
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Re: Torn Apart
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:47:21 AM AEST
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phenomenal write, i use to do the same thing when i got really upset. I love the flow and rhyming scheme, thanks for sharing with us, and i hope u find a better outlet for releasing pain, less destructive = good :)
Blessed Be
Jenni xxoo |
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