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Tears
Contributed by
JenJen
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Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 06:04:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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These tears I cry,
The nights Ive lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost
A world of hate,
A friend thats gone,
An everlasting pain,
Have to start again at dawn.
These tears I cry,
The nights Ive lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost
Silent days,
Thoughtful nights,
Uncomfortable conversations,
Many more fights.
These tears I cry,
The nights Ive lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost
Another fight between us,
Another tear I cry,
Apologises all round,
But all I want to do is die.
These tears I cry,
The nights Ive lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost
Put on a brave face,
And beat the crowd,
Fool everyone around you,
Make your friends proud.
These tears I cry,
The nights Ive lost,
My hearts been broken,
And this is the cost
Your home again,
You can let yourself go,
No need to pretend,
Time for another cry, no-one will know.
These tears I cry,
The nights Ive lost,
My hearts been broken,
And that was the cost!
~*~xXx~*~
Copyright ©
JenJen
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2006-01-14 18:04:33]
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Re: Tears
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 06:22:40 PM AEST
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yes, very painful write... hang in there.. Raquel Leah.. wonderful poem..
Put on a brave face,
And beat the crowd,
Fool everyone around you,
Make your friends proud.
What would happen, if a person showed him/herself naturally, smiling when necessary, crying when necessary, showing love always... |
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Re: Tears
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by kiza on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 07:05:02 PM AEST
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| that was an amazin poem.how old are? i wish i could write like that!!!!! |
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Re: Tears
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:49:40 AM AEST
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aww sadness.... but i really enjoyed this one!!! great write keep it up!
Blessed Be
Jenni xxoo |
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Re: Tears
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by Honesty_strikes_my_pen on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 01:53:07 PM AEST
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| WOW...I could feel every inch of pain you are expressing!good luck with this! |
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Re: Tears
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by princess_of_pain on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 11:07:06 PM AEST
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| great poem, very powerful. ur an amazing writer!! |
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