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Someone Else
Contributed by
mazeof_darkness
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Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 08:14:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Not myself; from the outside I look in.
Detached from life, Distraught within.
Anger I feel,about a past,
I don't even want.
Someone else; to be; why not?
Confusion seeps, my heart overflows.
My passion is deep, but no one will ever know.
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2006-01-14 20:14:11]
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Re: Someone Else
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by shelby on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 08:21:01 PM AEST
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I felt the frustration and emotional energie throughout this write. Nicely done. Cheer up soon, when things seem the darkest is when the brightest sun shines in.
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Re: Someone Else
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 01:46:13 AM AEST
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I can relate -more than I care to admit.
The first two lines, I have experienced more than i can recall...
I like that the piece is brief,. It is enough to want more, yet also enough to be thoroughly satisfied with.
I really have enjoyed reading over some of your other pieces.
I think you have skill.
And I can deeply correlate with these feelings.
Cordially yours -- |
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