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cruel
Contributed by
smcadams
on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 01:52:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I caress my shiny pod
soothing the turmoil of
butterfly life inside
The ghostman's tin can
beats wildly
He white-knuckles a pillow
making my sky a white
dangerous softness
so like him
I suffocate in the
past choking
The snap, snap, snap
of Hannah's tiny ribs
The erasure of Jason
I am a tree
he a tempest
So much for love, Kathy
do be careful dear
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smcadams
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2006-01-15 01:52:23]
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Re: cruel
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 02:00:53 AM AEST
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| Nice poem.. welcome to your poetry dot com. |
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Re: cruel
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:18:53 AM AEST
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wow this one is a giant riddle isnt it??
what i got from it was that its a pregnant woman in an abusive relationship....anyways im sure thats wrong totally but do send me a message to tell me what its about please? Thanks a million and great write! welcome 2 your-poetry ;)
Blessed Be
Jenni xxoo
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Re: cruel
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by Marko on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:40:39 PM AEST
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This is impressive but a bit scary(I read it much
the same way as Jenni) Is Jason the man? |
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