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Twisted Tale
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 04:15:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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CANNOT
tolerate a liar
a manipulator
a deciever
a two-faced imitator
and that's what you seem
to me
to be
Make up stories
I can't concieve why
most are transparent lies
I realize you are young, child
but I was young once too
I never told lies
as you seem
the need to do
You are like two different
people
all rolled into one
split-personality princess
in your lonely kingdom
You call yourself an athesist
say you delve in arts of Wicca
Days later you talk of
your love for God
whilst you stroke your
diamond crucifix
Please don't wear that
Grateful Dead shirt, sister
You show it only shame and
sorrowful disgrace
Just the other day you
were all dressed in black
called yourself a goth girl
dark make-up smeared
all over your
sad
paled
confused
face
Let me give you some
good advice
Keep
your sorry self
away
from
my fragile
space.
Penned early 2005
Laura Horner
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
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2006-01-15 16:15:36]
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Re: Twisted Tale
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by PHISHBATES on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 04:20:34 PM AEST
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| angst, very raw. many youth are directionless, lead, very nice write |
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Re: Twisted Tale
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 04:21:41 PM AEST
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YIPPPIIIIIIIIIIEEEE!
u go gurl!!!!!!!
luv this. i think u been around me for awhile.
Huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Twisted Tale
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:43:52 AM AEST
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hummmm, i think i'll just say peace 2u my sister laura on this one lol. and leave it at that
glad i'm not on the receiving end of this one lol. yes deffinately peace . . .
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Re: Twisted Tale
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:42:30 PM AEST
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WOW those are angry words gal. She must have "burnt ya bad." Well remember that old saying "What goes around Comes around!"
Don't sweat the small stuff. It too will pass.
Whisper |
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Re: Twisted Tale
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 05:55:29 PM AEST
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Oh Laura, girl .. so much pain here. I'm so sorry you
had to deal with a situation as difficult as this must have
been for you. You penned the emotion flawlessly..
God, I LOVE that last stanza. There are a couple I'd
love to say that too, myself! *hugs*
~MG |
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