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Where Ice Was Before
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 05:20:17 PM in AEST
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Festering cesspools
Infection of soul
Those lost to themselves
They dont know
Hatred only emotion
Must hurt others hearts
Only way they feel better
Is to throw poison darts
Blight on humanity
Never reach out a hand
Rather wallow in self pity
Than help someone to stand
If they forget about
Their pitiful plight
And they work to make
Someone elses load light
They may get a glimpse
Of a truly joyful heart
And be surprised when
Of their spirit it is a part
For outward things bring
Happiness for only a moment
But reaching out to those in need
To our soul is time well spent
Even just a smile
Or opening a door
Can leave a warm spot
Where ice was before
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NoSaint
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2006-01-15 17:20:17]
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Re: Where Ice Was Before
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 05:41:05 PM AEST
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Very wise, truthfull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Where Ice Was Before
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 06:49:53 PM AEST
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BRAVO!!!!SPECTACULAR!!!! This is absolutely amazing Shari........So true, so genuine, and so few words to describe those selfish, self-centered people, who lack love for another, but truly are "Lover's of themselves!"
Boy, this one will always be one of my favorites!
Warm love
consue
I love the ending! |
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Re: Where Ice Was Before
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 09:50:45 PM AEST
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| The last verse was a clincher!! Good write, Shari.... |
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Re: Where Ice Was Before
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:37:45 PM AEST
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WoW Shari a truly outstanding and perfectly penned poem detailing what a difference we can make in a persons life. By giving a helping hand or even a sweet smile. These are just a few things we can do to lighten someones load. 5 shining beautiful stars for u sweet lady. Thanks for sharing this awesome write with us.
*warm hugs*
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Re: Where Ice Was Before
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 07:58:42 PM AEST
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| yes, amazing truth, and my husband still comes home to tell me the good news, of how I have delighted ones soul by my kindness, which I am very kind, never knew I did that much good damage lol, well michael runs into a lot of people around our area, find out for me, I never see them, but why do he lol.. and so I get good news, and then I say, thank you Lord for helping me learn your lessons, well, I am belated in comments here, and now I see all my friends got here before me, and at least I got here lol. with your help, thank you , keep message me, I want to see all you write.. every drop of letters raquelLeah :D |
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