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Chance
Contributed by
marshmalloska
on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 07:43:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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the fall and break of crystal
tears
burns paths of fire
through sad cold air
the moment
that that realises the fear
acid snap
and photos dare to capture this
as if
flip a coin up to the sunset sky
air chance, providence dance
the moment that decides it all
suspends, suspends, suspends
suspense
siver and hope
melt and run glass perfect
skip forward and eternity
to where a coin lands on its side
and the poet attempts with word
the moments formaldehyde
absurd
Copyright ©
marshmalloska
... [
2006-01-15 19:43:53]
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Re: Chance
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:27:16 PM AEST
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WoW this is an outstanding and very well penned piece of poetry. I absolutely love the way you've brought this across to ur reader. Captivating from start to finish. Well done.
*warm hugs*
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