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My Silent Tears
Contributed by
drapes
on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 09:01:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The anger and tension
Building up. Bottled up inside.
Waiting, begging to come out.
Silence is the way we live.
My silent tears.
Pouring down my arms.
Deep red. Full.
Full of anger, love, hate, loneliness, desperation, hope, memories, fantasies, jealousy.
Cold metal
Presses down
To release the tension.
Until next time.
My Silent Tears
Scream for help.
Scream for attention.
Scream for everything I cant say.
What I hate, what I love. What I want so badly.
Secrets.
Dirty Little Secrets.
Wound up and twisted and pulled so tight
That nothing can squeeze by
Without getting trapped in the forever, ongoing hate.
But Its all in my head.
All in my head.
My head.
My head
Bang, bang, bang.
Knock some sense into it.
Its all my fault.
I
Am
The screw up.
The nothing.
The pathetic sight.
Pathetic sound.
Pathetic thought.
Pathetic excuse for anything worth something
In this pathetic world
Of wannabes,
Posers,
Liars.
But Im true to myself.
I speak the truth
That nobody else will tell me.
Too afraid to hurt me.
The lies, the pretending, the looks,
It kills me more than anything.
But I know theres always something to count on:
My Silent Tears.
Copyright ©
drapes
... [
2006-01-16 21:01:20]
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Re: My Silent Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 09:10:20 PM AEST
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WOW...Deep write here...well written....
Hope all is not lost and that you'll be ok...
Jenni |
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Re: My Silent Tears
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by princess_of_pain on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:07:08 PM AEST
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great poem. deep. stunning. breathtaking. amazing.
good job. |
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Re: My Silent Tears
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by Lone_er on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 11:32:32 PM AEST
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| A very powerful write....Russ |
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Re: My Silent Tears
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 07:28:58 AM AEST
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| Wow very powerful write here i loved it. I hope you are ok and things get better for you. |
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Re: My Silent Tears
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 09:00:42 AM AEST
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...poetry is such an awesome vehicle for communication...emotions boil in you, pour through your finger tips, the maze of wires, into the atmosphere, back into a maze of wires, onto my screen and into my pot of boiling emotions...it's magic...and when written down, I can keep talking even when I'm dead and gone...
...this one, your poem, addresses a universal theme and does so with great power...funny, some people are driven to alcohol, cocaine, sex, heroin etc. to relieve the pain...then there are others who are driven to poetry! ...and it's legal! I wonder if you can overdose on poetry...
...keep screaming the Truth of your reality...keep your ears peeled...the answer is out there, somewhere...
ron...enigma |
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Re: My Silent Tears
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by RavenEnsued on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 10:17:51 PM AEST
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| Amazing poem, made me want to cry. It seems that though everything is a figment of reality you dont' look to death for compassion but to your feelings. this is my interpretation of it, i may be wrong but it's still an amazing poem. I |
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Re: My Silent Tears
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by poetryfreak13 on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 09:53:05 PM AEST
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| This poem is so sad. It really expresses your thoughts well. It also reminds me of a friend, who cuts and feels the same way. It seems that death is a release of the buildup of pain that people are inundated with in everyday life. Great Job. |
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Re: My Silent Tears
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by ale5shr on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 09:51:27 AM AEST
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| I cut and totally understand what your writing |
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