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Unacknowledged Abuse
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 12:13:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Submissive I stand,
Amongst your abuse,
That is unseen,
Unnoticed,
Unconsciously dealt.
Invisible myself,
With every invisible bruise,
I only wish,
And desire,
Long for them to be felt.
A spiderweb,
You walk through me,
Brush me off,
Whisked away,
Never seen and nearly noticed.
You worry not,
Of the threads you leave,
Broken,
Fallen,
With not a glance of the remotest.
Mirror mirror,
I have seen and felt,
Inspiration,
Perfection,
My final destination.
Though I'm pained,
To watch silently and melt,
And boil,
Evaporate,
I wait still for your realization.
Submissive I stand,
Amongst your abuse,
That is unseen,
Unnoticed,
Unconsciously dealt.
Invisible myself,
With every invisible bruise,
I only wish,
And desire,
Long for them to be felt.
Because at least you would have acknowledged me.
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Jane_Doe
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2006-01-17 00:13:43]
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Re: Unacknowledged Abuse
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by mrpeanut64 on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 01:02:59 AM AEST
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| there is someone out there who will see you for who you are. don't miss the right one because your looking at the wrong one. |
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Re: Unacknowledged Abuse
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by slogan on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 03:55:55 AM AEST
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| great piece of poetry.. An unacknowledged reflection of pain and suffering that has somehow managed to escape from a dark abyss of denial and abuse... great job...jh |
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Re: Unacknowledged Abuse
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 10:33:01 AM AEST
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| i like this poem, so much pain, hope you find peace. |
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