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Shooting Star
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 07:30:25 AM in AEST
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Like lace in the clear night sky
The stars twinkled by and by
Forming patterns of diamond light
In the dark recesses of the night
Across the heavens like a streak
A shooting star took a peak
At the world down below
And decided to make its wish grow
For all of the earth to be filled with love
This was its desire for us from above
Peace, Harmony and Tranquility
This is what the little star hoped would be
Now this star gave up its life
Hoping to end worldly strife
So when you see a star descend
It might be our little friend
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NoSaint
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2006-01-17 07:30:25]
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Re: Shooting Star
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 08:19:42 AM AEST
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What a beautiful image :) I wait for that star fall in very soon!
Very good writing. |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 10:03:31 AM AEST
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its nice i liked it alot and thank u for reading one of mine byebye
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Re: Shooting Star
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by bernard2 on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 11:58:53 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem it is simple but very effective. We all want a shooting star to brighten up our lives. bernard2 |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 12:29:52 AM AEST
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This is so great Shari, now everytime I see a shooting star I can think of this most outstanding poem.
I'm so glad you are so inspired, I love your poetry. And this the neatest one yet!
Warm lov
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Re: Shooting Star
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 09:29:59 PM AEST
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oh thank you for letting me know of this poem, and it is delightful, and it is so tender, I felt that tear pinch in my heart.. reminds us all to be good and love our little hearts out for our little star friend who gave up His life for us, so we could be rich in all love, peace and joy, harmony, I love the Shooting Star with all my heart.
Thank you for this blessed write Raquel Leah |
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