|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
My G-d
Contributed by
freckle
on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 04:09:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
|
Hidden from our eyes
the L-rd leads us
sometimes
the still waters
rise up
the crashing waves
surround
pulling us
We cling
to our faith
perilously
Crying out
My G-d, my G-d
why have thou forsaken me?
Hidden from our eyes
the Lord answers us
His whispered words
stir in our hearts
Around and around they
spin
and
spin
Our minds fill
with the words
spinning
in our hearts
We hold on
we believe
We see our G-d
and we know
that our G-d
is so personal
so distinctly
our Father
that we will
stand alone
before Him
Hidden from our eyes
the L-rd holds us
in the palm
of His hand
and we know
what we can't see
is still
his unending love.
Carol Sossaman
2006
Copyright ©
freckle
... [
2006-01-17 16:09:53]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: My G-d
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 04:35:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Carol,
a most beautiful write. I felt your turmoil and I love poetry that moves me through emotions.
I hope it works out well for you try not to worry to much. This is a year of many seeking out spiritual journies your husband may be one of them.
Hugs
Michelle |
|
|
Re: My G-d
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 04:43:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautiful poem carol gives a non beleiver hope . . .
((((carol))))
Ben |
|
|
Re: My G-d
(User Rating: 1 )
by Mangos on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 06:42:49 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You should not equate the lord with a single religion, for if he is truly the lord he will accept the way your husband chooses to worship him?
|
|
|
Re: My G-d
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 07:59:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wonderful, meaning filled poem. Yes, God has a purpose in all that's done: To glorify the majesty of His dear Son.
God bless |
|
|
Re: My G-d
(User Rating: 1 )
by shutterfly2004 on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 02:04:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This was good! |
|
|
Re: My G-d
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 12:50:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Surprisingly I am reminded of the series by CS Lewis (and no I have not seen the movie yet)
But in the last book it is said that it doesn't matter the name of your God or faith, but what is in your heart goes to the one God that is all gods.
A well done piece! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
