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Gold And Tarnished Brass
Contributed by
Dri
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Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 05:37:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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when I left Germany I was just a small girl- so young and so left alone in the so cold harshness of a newfound humanity- it left me I didnt think it would, but like the men Ive learned to love departure on a wing of hope never to return again
he doesnt understand why its so hard for me to trust in anything why I constantly take what is real and make it much worse than whatever could be he doesnt tell me this he wont I dont think he even knows how
I sit on the same bed- I sleep between the same sheets here where Ive come so far in this room where I fell so far past who I expected myself to be
what I know is all Ill ever trust have you any idea how many people mistake the two? how many people take sex and say love and how many lovers let it be?
I refuse- I will not let it alone he cant see why I dont want to believe in gold and find it to be a tarnished brass I would love to just let it be but I dont think I even know how he loved me I dont even know how
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Re: Gold And Tarnished Brass
(User Rating: 1 ) by enigma on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 11:14:49 AM AEST (User
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Dri...
...how many of us are out there...we were told so much out there was gold to find out the best of it was tarnished brass, but the bulk of it was that brown stuff...very little out there can be trusted...it is mostly illusory...reality is six, seven, eight layers beneath...
...think about this possibility...if what was presented to us was presented as gold but ended up being yuck, yuck...perhaps what they said was yuck, yuck, just might be gold...let me say it another way...you, I, a whole lot of us have lived life believing we were tarnished brass...is it possible we, ourselves, each of us is the Gold we have been looking for...ultimately, each of us is the only entity to be truly trusted...
...I know you are pure Gold, Dri...pure Gold...
...could...
ron...enigma |
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