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The Warning
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 11:02:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME?
I have no sympathy
left
Lost it all
years ago
too many tales
get locked
inside
Go on away
from here
Don't you smell
my fear?
I am no use to you
at all
Try to walk along
in my footsteps
I wont blink
when you fall
Turn my head
let you flee
the maddening
scene
you can't help me
You must retreat
While you still possess
your sanity
Penned October 2005
Laura Horner
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
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2006-01-17 23:02:51]
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Re: The Warning
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 01:22:36 AM AEST
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Sad but written well. Please take it easy on yourself, my friend.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: The Warning
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 03:03:24 AM AEST
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Laura, I think to be a poet ... one must sometimes be willing to embrace the insane. So ... that said ... I a'inta goin nowhere ... LOL. Some of the more self aware write I have ... were just that, self directed. It is OK to be dissappointed in or at oneself, the challenge is to not go there the same way again.
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Re: The Warning
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by Broken-Suicide on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:56:48 AM AEST
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No one really understand what we go through, until they walk a month in our shoes.
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Re: The Warning
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 06:47:39 AM AEST
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hippynurse
Sometimes we are lost in ourselves and feel we have nowhere to turn.
Your choice of words make this very clear.
We eventually come out of it and move on.
nicely said.
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Re: The Warning
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 05:56:26 PM AEST
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Laura .. I have to agree with snazzy on this one. It IS
okay to feel disappointment in ourselves. And writing
about it MUST be therapeutic as well. We only need
to forgive ourselves to begin the healing.
We are human. We are flawed , and we are not always
going to do everything to perfection (as WE would see fit!)
This is a wonderful write of the anguish we feel when
frustrated with ourselves and know not where to go
from there ..
I have been here
*hugs*
~MG |
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