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Hiding
Contributed by
MedicatedMindFreak
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Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 09:48:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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He sits alone in his room
Looking at pictures of friends
Wondering if they really like him
He looks around when a tear comes to his face
Tring to hide if from the rest of the world
Wanting to know if anyone knows or cares
He starts the rain, begins the fire
Angles try to save him but he pushs them away
He needs someone to say they care
Before he ends his life with just one bang
Walking in school pretending hes happy
Jumps around messes with his friends
So they cant see the pain coming from him
Does his work, what a good student
He descibes his hurt through poems noone hears
And cries alone wishing someone was there
He starts the rain, begins the fire
Angles try to save him but he pushs them away
He needs someone to say they care
Before he ends his life with just one bang
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2006-01-18 09:48:57]
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Re: Hiding
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 10:02:07 AM AEST
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This is deep and emotional. I liked it because I could relate. I felt that way for such a long time and i still do. This was a great poem.
Thanks for the comment.
take care
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