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The Ravens moonlight
Contributed by
UKRaVeN
on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 01:55:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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With the raven in the tower
we watch the moon call out my name
tonight the stars sit up and listen
tonight they understand my pain
I just sit and think about you
pull out a faded photgraph
i look up to the haunting raven
will i ever refind my laugh?
The moon begins to lower
and the raven bids goodnight
Flys away into the distance
he is the way he is the light....
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UKRaVeN
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2006-01-18 13:55:05]
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Re: The Ravens moonlight
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 01:59:48 PM AEST
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| Beautiful! I loved it. Keep writing! |
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Re: The Ravens moonlight
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 03:23:32 PM AEST
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well welcome to ypdc and a lovely write keep on posting i will have to read more
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Re: The Ravens moonlight
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by gwenevere on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 03:44:03 PM AEST
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Welcome .A really lovely poem.The last verse would read better
The moon begins to lower
The Raven bid's goodnight
Fly's into the distance
He is the way, the light
I love the story and the picture you paint.I hope you write lots more, Ros |
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Re: The Ravens moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 02:25:15 AM AEST
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| Keep writing! Yes, let the pen runneth over. Love your poem. |
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Re: The Ravens moonlight
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 05:30:05 PM AEST
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Firstly a big warm welcome to YPDC. I hope u enjoy it here.
A very well penned first submission. I love the imagery u cast into the readers head.
I hope to read some more poetry by you.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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