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Falling
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
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Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:12:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Whispering wind blows secrets into my hair
Flailing it about manically is a dance of breath
I am falling down this winding crevasse
And into the bottomless pit of anguish
Red velvet rose petals float down in demise
From the once-green stem of a lullaby
The sighing flowers wave at me
Mocking me as I fly downward towards the chasm of depression
A sun-bleached face of sheer delight
With eyes full of sunshine light
A face Aphrodite herself could not help but love
Looks down upon my heartbreak transient but strong
Not a tear in your sparkling eyes
Or a worry wrinkled in your flawless face
Why did you push me so far over the edge?
You laugh at me so maliciously with no regret
Tumbling downward into a pool of tears
With a broken heart as my torn parachute
I will not emerge from this fall
I know my end is at the bottom
But, like the captain for her ship, I will go down
For one will do anything for love
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Re: Falling
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:27:26 PM AEST
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why is it that people are so cruel when all they have to do is be honest especially when they know someone loves them...
Good poem
Red velvet rose petals float down in demise--Love this line!
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Re: Falling
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 05:09:42 PM AEST
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| Love can take us over the edge / or make us see what we really deserve....mike |
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Re: Falling
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by UKRaVeN on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 05:36:43 PM AEST
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thank you that was great read
flowed beaitufully |
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Re: Falling
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 05:45:50 PM AEST
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great writing! i love the fact that it's full of imagery
and strong sense of direction too.
A sun-bleached face of sheer delight
With eyes full of sunshine light
A face Aphrodite herself could not help but love
It's just a small snippet of a great tapestry
thanks for sharing and take care! |
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Re: Falling
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 02:22:02 AM AEST
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| Such a great poem, so beautifully written. You have talent, so keep on writing, I will visit again soon. |
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Re: Falling
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by brew on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 09:39:13 AM AEST
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Agreed.......Ppl do tend to hide what they truly see...and "why" is always asked and wondered on...havent any answers yet, they are there.~
Brew~ |
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Re: Falling
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by MedicatedMindFreak on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 12:57:36 PM AEST
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Great writing, i love it , you can picture everything.
~Liz~ |
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