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a flake or fluff
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:27:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a divided sentence lost but not forgotten
like a butterfly in the night
oh falling star this man made dream
give me my wish so we all could scream
this starlight bright tequila night wish me my sin tonight
not a fluff or a fragrant disease
just something to bend and please
atom death a taste in breath
chocking on Industrial mess
a lost cause in this whores dream
she rides the beasts regime
such a cause for such unruly right
a nightmare dream we wake in fright
slaves ruiling slaves whip in hand
strikeing that pose the scrape the land
Columbus dream divide and rule
things that were taught threw out school
greed and rich they get what they get
funded by goverment with there own private jet
a plague in our system substantially corrupt
this is the time that we must erupt
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2006-01-18 16:27:34]
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Re: a flake or fluff
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by UKRaVeN on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:36:16 PM AEST
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| wow a great vision :) |
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Re: a flake or fluff
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 05:56:39 PM AEST
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great imagery and excellent wordplay!
"this starlight bright tequila night wish me my sin tonight
not a fluff or a fragrant disease
just something to bend and please"
keep up the fine writing! |
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Re: a flake or fluff
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by brew on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 08:42:24 AM AEST
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Good abstract writing, Regan. Took to some depth.
Brew~ |
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