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the long drive
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 08:37:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Gripping tightly on my hopes and dreams
Heart beating faster the world saw to be lonely in my rearview mirror
Here I am again
Talking to myself
Sitting at a red light
Both hands on the wheel
How am I supposed to feel?
So much running through my mind
It's so hard to let you in
Thinking you might slam the brakes again
Push the pedal down
Heading out of town you tell me that you love me first
Then throw your heart into reverse
I gotta get away it's so hard to move on
Cause every time I think you're gone
You show up in my rearview mirror
Vehicle spins out of control
My fear grows of what the road ahead brings
but i geuss i will just have to wait and see
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2006-01-18 20:37:40]
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Re: the long drive
(User Rating: 1 )
by lost_chadow on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 08:42:44 PM AEST
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| whoa...doesn't suck at all. i can feel the accelaration, that brakes, the swerve, very good imagery |
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Re: the long drive
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 02:43:03 PM AEST
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aww poor baby.
i love you.
love and hugs mom |
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