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Hawks Dream
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 01:56:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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She watched the hawks
Flying over the field
Wondering what
Their hunt would yield
Always amazed
At their style and grace
She loved their feathers
And the cut of their face
It was early
On a hot summers eve
What she saw next
She could not believe
A hawk landed
In the field nearby
Raising his wings
To the heavens on high
He let out a squawk
Then instantly changed
Into a handsome man
She thought she was deranged
He walked up to her
And gave her his hand
Saying, come with me
We will leave this land
So together they fly
Over field and stream
Was this reality?
Or just one beautiful dream
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-01-19 13:56:30]
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Re: Hawks Dream
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by SocialMisfit on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 02:01:31 PM AEST
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this is good, but it feels to short,...the ending seemed to me to come a bit to abrupt, but im a fan of epic's so lol, but i loved the idea of the write, cudos on a good write.
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Re: Hawks Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 08:38:20 PM AEST
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Awww what a sweet poem....
Keep on dreaming, my friend...
Jenni
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Re: Hawks Dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 07:36:03 PM AEST
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| Its reality to me, maybe its ok to you, if I say, this is a very nice inspirational write.. well, ok, yes, I had Jesus on my mind, is what your write does to me. loved it all the way through, so what if it is a dream, dreams come true too..raquelLeah |
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Re: Hawks Dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 07:36:53 PM AEST
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| one more thing lol, the dream came true for her, that is all that matters. raquelLeah :D |
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