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Suppose that I am lonely
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 03:13:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Suppose that I am lonely.
Pressed fingers upon the dying glass
(Forest black, soft and severed by the endlessness of love),
I face the Autumn's dread embrace;
Simple graces dream desires drowning day.
Smokey crags in gray or silver-deeper silver than the moon-lay upon the dying glass; a path ahead me lay fell below my dreary stead, lay fell against the open glass.
Light
comes tumbled from a freezing sky.
Blind sorrow shelters the placidity of night; comes still and frightening.
I imagine what it is to be alone.
Sudden moments, minutes far too soon
too far gone
the seconds falling down
falling down around the threads above a dirty door.
My heart beats vibrant blue, and gold is the color of my love.
My love being soft, soft love sleeping at the bottom of my bed.
A broken thought considers black paradise parading through the rain.
I feel like there is nothing left.
I suppose that I am lonely.
(maybe I'm just lazy)
Through an open window shines the sun, and seals my thoughts
with dust and glass.
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2006-01-21 15:13:56]
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Re: Suppose that I am lonely
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 04:06:38 PM AEST
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| I quite enjoyed this very profound write. Several lines made me take a double check for instance....Light comes tumbled from a freezing sky. Blind sorrow shelters the placidity of night; comes still and frightening....and this .....Sudden moments, minutes far too soon ....too far gone the seconds falling down around the threads above a dirty door.....Beautifully penned. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Suppose that I am lonely
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by TREBOR on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 06:33:11 PM AEST
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Vomit?
There is so much beauty in this poem
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