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Fading away
Contributed by
LifeFadingAway
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Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 03:43:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You say I have to grow up
Look a yourself what you've become
Nothing more than an empty shell
Taking everything for granted
Sometimes it seems like you don't exist
Faking the smile on your face
I know your unhappy but you don't fight it
Is it that you just turned eighteen
Is it that you're leaving this place
You only tell me half the story
But I wonder about the truth
You now are just another example
Of how growing up is killing you
You tell me to grow up
But I don't want to dissappear
Fight for your rights
Don't let life control you
I want to tell you what you've become
But I can't because it's the truth
And I don't want to hurt you
Again it seems you're dissappearing
But you are leaving
So I won't see you
You will dissappear
From my life
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LifeFadingAway
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2006-01-21 15:43:15]
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Re: Fading away
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by Shmokin on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 06:06:57 PM AEST
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| Started well but sadly like the title, faded away toward the end, good attempt :-) |
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Re: Fading away
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by Devils-confused-daugther on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 07:20:46 AM AEST
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hey, and its sooo true! ive seen a friend grow up and life did them no gd, and now everyone is telling me to grow up and i dont wanna fade away as u say, but meh, ur poem is KOOL! and yeah
cya round DCD |
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