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everyones a critic
Contributed by
Marko
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Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 08:37:45 AM in AEST
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We go back to reality
Everythings a travesty
You cant make it big
Your family is the only people who think you can sing
Youre nothing to the world population
If you die the only people who arrive to the funeral are only there for the cake
And your name was Blake
You wrote the best ever song
And then forgot it
You started to make friends but could not read there phone number
Thats because youre dumber
What a bummer
You cant read or write
To you the sun is never bright
But turn to Christianity
And who knows you might be real to humanity
Copyright ©
Marko
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2006-01-22 08:37:45]
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Re: everyones a critic
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by Marko on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 08:48:32 AM AEST
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| VERY GOOD WRITE MARKO |
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Re: everyones a critic
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by crazy on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 10:47:59 AM AEST
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| ok this is a kool piece ng |
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