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Blurred line
Contributed by
astralbermudian
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Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Blurred Line
Loved and trusted by many a friend,
Hugged and pampered until the end,
Given the love that we all yearn for,
I hung with the rich, I hung with the poor.
Is this what the doctor forced upon me?
Am I just a test, thrown down onto thee?
Is this depression produced from a drug?
Or did it form from those forceful hugs?
I asked these questions many a night,
Always giving myself a ghastly fright,
Is this death flowing through my brain?
Or is that just blood gushing from my vein?
I came, I saw, I laughed, I cried,
I pushed, I hurt, I was denied,
The reason I write is because of you,
The time you punched me and blood I spew.
So please reply in due time,
Its getting harder to write a rhyme,
My visions getting blurry as I write,
All because of you and that frightful night.
You took me into your arms again,
You gave me a watch; I gave you a pen,
I saw the fist clench and release,
After that I saw your back, come back Denise.
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2006-01-23 05:35:00]
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Re: Blurred line
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 05:56:58 AM AEST
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| his is very good, well done |
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Re: Blurred line
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 08:46:45 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Blurred line
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by brew on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 12:09:28 PM AEST
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Tears for one. Hmmmm saddnes, and yet will it get better?~! Your writes, are full of power, and yes, deep with darkness.! Thanks again.
Brew~ |
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Re: Blurred line
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by ludders on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 01:53:18 PM AEST
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| meh ah very good very good (in italian slurred accent) |
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