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high tide fun
Contributed by
kegs04
on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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high as a kite
I love you
what up with you?
*muah!*
you say "Psshhh"
i say "ugh~whatever"
woo woo clap clap
high high high
dont care
laugh laugh
years pass
...cough-hack
well it was fun
fun for awhile-- while you were young
...cough-hack
had some good times
--good times die
so does everything else
so do you
yea, well your dreams are dead now too
and now so are you
...cough-hack
was it really worth it?
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kegs04
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2003-01-26 22:00:00]
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Re: high tide fun
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 08:20:17 PM AEST
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| this is a wonderful poem, everyone of us is guilty of thinking life will last forever when we are young.............. but alas.. it does not, i like how you did this brought a smile to my face.. huggs always nessa |
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Re: high tide fun
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 12:11:15 PM AEST
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Kegs,
YES |
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Re: high tide fun
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by kegs04 on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 01:22:03 AM AEST
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whatever you do in life, no matter the consenquences is worth it?
~kegs
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Re: high tide fun
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by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 01:24:52 AM AEST
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| Dear Kegs, Well spoken message. Showed alot of insight and wisdom. Hope to see more of this. Bizzy |
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