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Please don't let me love you
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
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Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 05:47:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If you know you can't be true
than please don't let me love you
if you won't always be there
then please don't let me care
if you'd just stand and watch me fall
then please don't let me feel anything at all
if you know you won't do your part
then please don't let me give you my heart
if you won't stand by me till the end
then please don't let me be a lover or a friend
please don't let me love you
if you know you can't be true
if you know that you will leave me broken and blue
then please, please don't let me love you
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Re: Please don't let me love you
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by OzChick on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 06:59:55 PM AEST
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The fear of falling in love when one has been hurt before....Yes, I know that feeling.
Well writen with good rhythm and rhyme, just one small problem, a typo really, I think you missed a word out in the 7th line. It's easy to do when your mind works faster than your fingers over the keyboard. LOL.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Please don't let me love you
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 07:03:54 PM AEST
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| This is very good, i liked it a lot, one of my favs for sure. |
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Re: Please don't let me love you
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 08:31:02 PM AEST
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well I hope that this love blooms for you into something special and your fears are eased.
Best of wishes to you my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: Please don't let me love you
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 08:46:59 PM AEST
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This is all so true.....tho' how can one ever be sure??? I guess we can always hope and dream....
Good write.. Thank you.
Jenni |
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Re: Please don't let me love you
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by hoist1atca on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 02:08:45 AM AEST
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Well Written-
A very honest request from a very tender heart-
To coin a phrase:" Tis better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all".
Now if one could only find a way toloose the pain of love as well-
Good luck and keep your ink flowing...
Joe |
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