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Forgive Me
Contributed by
Sparda
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Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 06:36:53 PM in AEST
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I miss you, And Im so sorry...
For all the times that I yelled at you...
The times when I didnt listen...
For the times that I made you feel blue...
The times when I was non existant...
For all the times you were nice to me,
And I just Ignored you, never phoned...
For the times I told you to just leave...
The times when I left you all alone...
For all the times when I made you cry...
The times when I got mad with you..
For all the times when I lied...
And when I broke your heart in two...
For all the times I made mistakes...
The times I said I didnt care...
For all the anger and hate,
And the times I was never there...
Forgive Me...
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Sparda
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2006-01-23 18:36:53]
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Re: Forgive Me
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 06:44:57 PM AEST
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in my eyes you are forgiven. realizing your mistakes takes courage.
great write and i loved it.
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Re: Forgive Me
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 06:52:43 PM AEST
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| An honest and sincere write. well done |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 07:46:53 PM AEST
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| Very heartfelt write, gave me goosebumps, reading it. I hope whomever you're speaking of, is able to forgive you. Most important though.....forgive yourself. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 08:25:49 PM AEST
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an apology so sincere and from the heart is the hardest thing to do. This flowed in its content and is loving in nature. Hopefully things work out and dont be hard on yourself.
Michelle |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by Sparda on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 08:46:45 PM AEST
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lol, just for the record, that isnt based on my life, like most of poetry is
I just thougt of the title and i wanted to see what i could come up with, and it was hard, cos i dont have anything to base that on, and i cant relate to it, but , thats what i came up with...hope you all like it
Im evil, but not in that way, lol, I know what it feels like tho...
-Sparda- |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by Arwen on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 05:31:43 AM AEST
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Well done Sparda :P~
It takes real talent to write something tht u can't really relate to :) u'r good
I liked the sincerety i felt in ur words.
Thanks for the read :)))
~ Arwen ~ |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 03:17:51 PM AEST
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| Beautiful word to say sorry. Great poem. |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by lonely_boy on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 08:18:46 AM AEST
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| very good write. so much emotion. keep up the good work. |
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