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Epithelium
Contributed by
cryzndiez
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Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 07:46:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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full of **** and full of lies
its got nothen when its from inside
everybody else but nothing else
sociably acceptable, neurodigestible
life's got nothing to do with it!
fun's come and gone when it comes to it!
this is the real world, this is the fake world
this is epithelium
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cryzndiez
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2006-01-24 07:46:08]
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Re: Epithelium
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 08:00:06 AM AEST
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...wonderful...I love a poet who can express their strength of emotion without fear...I don't swear casually...I'm not sure anyone does theoretically...but, there are emotions that demand the red hot words...your leg gets blown off..."Goodness, me!"...your heart gets ripped out..."Oh, my!"...mother nature wipes out a mega-city..."Aw, shucks!"...I don't think so...
...I also loved the use of that word...epithelium...strange, foreign, unfriendly, sterile...it carries so many emotions in its little suitcase...people walk around day in and day out in shallowness of thought, feeling, purpose, spirit and have become quite comfortable with it...but, when you give those patterns of living the name, epithelium...it's like when the Kirby Vacuum Man informs you that you are sleeping in a pile of old dead skin cells...yuck!...I do that...
...I liked how you told your story and I agree wholeheartedly with your story...
...thanks,
ron...enigma |
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