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Fourteen + Seventeen = One Great Summer
Contributed by
pyrochick
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Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 08:04:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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ohh, i was just fourteen
livin in a world of chilish dreams
thought that he was the sweetest thing
and soon forgot bout everything
me and him alone in my room
me and him kissin under the moon
everything just seemed so right
not once was there a lonely night
he knew where to touch me
to make me melt
but he couldn't see
how i felt
when those lips were pressed against mine
i could of sworn that god, had stopped time
counting his freckles one-by-one
walking together in the hot summer sun
touching my body in every place
kissing every spot on my face
he never knew what that did to me
cuz he never took the chance to look and see
that was our summer; his and mine
it was brutally sweet and mean
now it's gone forever, lost in the sands of time
but found in my memory
ohh, i was just fourteen
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Re: Fourteen + Seventeen = One Great Summer
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 03:06:12 PM AEST
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