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A Deadly Silencer
Contributed by
xXx_lil_pyro_xXx
on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 12:19:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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One cut. Two cuts.
Three cuts. Four.
After that cut,
There's no more.
One week. Two weeks.
Three weeks, straight.
No cuts, since!
Now this is great!
Three cuts. Four cuts.
Five cuts.Six.
Across your skin,
That fresh blade slips.
Pressing harder.
Deeper down.
Bloodflow trickles.
You fall to the ground.
You cut to silence pain
And then,
You never wake
To hurt again.
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xXx_lil_pyro_xXx
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2006-01-24 12:19:57]
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Re: A Deadly Silencer
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by Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 03:20:37 PM AEST
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| well, that describes perfectly how I felt when I used to cut... I have not cut for over a year now and it's something I'm very proud of myself for... this poem really shows how someone feels when they cut... "You cut to silence pain" |
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Re: A Deadly Silencer
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 10:41:50 PM AEST
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| Wow a very powerfull poem. I remember I use to cut back in 8th grade, heh three years, no cutting at all. Heh. Thank you for this good poem. Keep writing. SLipSiX. |
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Re: A Deadly Silencer
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:55:40 PM AEST
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kind of sad that people cut themselves
but the only reason they do is cause of
pain and they are trying to reach out for help.
I have never done that and i am sorry you went threw this i hope you are not doing it anymore ,,, anyways nice poem^_^ |
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Re: A Deadly Silencer
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 03:28:05 PM AEST
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Wow, I really love this poem!
"You cut to silence pain"
That's the best line. It's so true.
-Drapes |
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Re: A Deadly Silencer
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by lilblkcat on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 01:30:37 PM AEST
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| Your poem was amazing and so very true. it only gets worse, never better. i had stopped for 7 months then i slipped again. im workin on it and your poem did make me think. thank you so much for sharing it. |
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