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Open Seas
Contributed by
cametrae
on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 03:22:31 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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Stuff the turkey
And eat some berries
In pie
Read the number seven
I love you
Like the bottom
Of the gum on the space ship
Spray paint my name
In hearts
Not circles
Never circles
Or squares
Always hearts
Just on the moon
Jupiter
Says Sailor Moon
She was a sailor
But not a moon
How is she a sailor?
In outer space?
She has no space ship.
Cries the aliens on Blue-black Lagoon
Arachnophobia
On my horse
Wait
Cries
I never received a horse on Christmas day
So I smiled in my dreams
Where I never really sleep
TECHNO
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cametrae
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2006-01-25 15:22:31]
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Re: Open Seas
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 04:17:25 PM AEST
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wow i am lost lol ty for posting it
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Re: Open Seas
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 02:35:30 PM AEST
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| This is a pretty cool poem though it was all over the place but stiil, A very good poem! |
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Re: Open Seas
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by ashleigh on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 02:53:46 PM AEST
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| The only thing that took away from this poem was that the lines were so short and when that happens, the poem tends to be read kind of fast. I liked it, otherwise, though. |
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