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My Angel
Contributed by
Candice
on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 11:08:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The lord sent a spy
To heal my broken hart
He had a lazy eye
A hinder to his art
It took him years to find me
For years I lived in pain
He searched the wide world over
And always failed in vane
This saint was on a mission
He never failed a case
For he was on commission
And needed one more ace
The man is a perfectionist
Despite his handicap
I was mistaken for a receptionist
But ounce he had a map
He tracked me down
He took my frown
He turned it round
And upside down
And just as quick as he appeared
His duty made him leave me here
He was promoted from a spy
To an angel in the sky
Although I miss him every day
He is around in his own way
He leaves a woman
Who has evolved
A beautiful angel made her whole.
Copyright ©
Candice
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2006-01-26 11:08:27]
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Re: My Angel
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by felicitous on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 05:40:33 AM AEST
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| I really enjoy the tone of peace that flows through this poem. Sadness...but peace. Well done. |
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Re: My Angel
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by Manda2 on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 04:56:05 PM AEST
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| Lovely poem Cand, I believe in angels and I love your one!! |
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Re: My Angel
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 07:05:46 AM AEST
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| Candy this poem deserved more comments it is brilliant, you should try to get your work published it deserves more recognition then your getting on here, that goes for lots of other brilliant poems I have read on this site.. xxxxxxx |
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