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Behind the Pedals
Contributed by
lifeslittleangel
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Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 01:24:05 PM in AEST
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behind the pedals are hidden the pain and the sorrow,the tears of a little girl scared to come out and play, the wings of a black bird flapping back and forth against the wind against the hand lifting her higher and higher to reach her goal to carry
on with the pain with the hidden scars on her skin the cuts she just watched bleed falling to the floor behind the pedas are also the joy and the love flowing through her veins i nthe blood not yet spilled everything hiding behind her rock her protection behind the pedals
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Re: Behind the Pedals
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 02:16:27 PM AEST
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| i like this a whole lot, great job, i can understand your pain, i've been in this situation, remember to keep ur head high and next time ur upset, think, and write before you act out on ur pain...that helped me :) |
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Re: Behind the Pedals
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 04:12:39 PM AEST
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| i liked it it has a nice flow |
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Re: Behind the Pedals
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 02:36:52 AM AEST
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Haunting write a almost dream like state of mind. Dealing with pain ,everyone does it differently. Thanks for sharing this piece.
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