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Fall Feelings
Contributed by
enigma
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Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 03:56:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Tender Souls
Worn by the winds
the forest reluctantly sheds her golden cape.
Proudly,
her trees stretch their fingers to the sun,
bowing and crying to no one.
But in the glow of the midnight eye,
their tender souls,
groan and cry,
as they ponder their children,
silently slipping,
one,
by one,
by one,
to the world below.
rko
1970
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enigma
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2006-01-26 15:56:07]
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Re: Fall Feelings
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by emystar on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 01:55:08 PM AEST
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I certainly hope u know wht they are talkin 'bout 'cause me mocomprenda????
Very beautifull thoughts, Makes a person feel all warm and cuddly.
huggs,
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Re: Fall Feelings
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 01:30:07 PM AEST
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This is a very interesting analigy, very metaphorical and true. This is pretty good. An extra stanza would have made it even better.
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