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Kate Maschine
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
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Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 05:59:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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My world is of flowers and fluff,
Streams of blood, skipping and stuff,
All there to pick up,
Swinging the sledgehammer in my other hand.
I keep trying to climb to the sky's top,
As the rest falls back to the land
A couple crude things but I forge on ahead,
Less to fall from my heart of lead.
The armor comes off though ever so slightly,
Brightness shines through within the cracks lightly.
Days of hate are leaving,
My lungs have started breathing,
Breaking free and able to smile,
For once things make this life worthwhile.
Copyright ©
assassinatorgirl
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2006-01-26 17:59:50]
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Re: Kate Maschine
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 01:31:51 PM AEST
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| Even though I don't like happy poetry because I can't relate, This poem was actually quite nice. Good Job! |
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Re: Kate Maschine
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by Scott on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:48:37 PM AEST
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Wow, more people should read this. I loved it. Great metaphorical (I'm assuming) imagery. I love 'swinging the slegehammer in my other hand'. Awesome write. 4.5/5
PS. nice rhyme scheme. |
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