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My Dilemma
Contributed by
Caged Soul
on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:38:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Im sitting in my room, alone
thinking, contemplating and speculating
on the meaning of the life Im living,
checking out the reflection in the mirror,
tryna figure out why I had to be
who I am
Its so unfair.
Whatever did I do in the life before this
to be deservant of this bitter bliss.
I cant be who I wanna be,
selfs path blocked by family name
and societal game.
Im messed up, wanting to be proud,
but at the same time make proud
those around me.
They are family after all
either we stand together or apart well fall.
This is the dilemma in which I find myself.
Copyright ©
Caged Soul
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2006-01-27 09:38:49]
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Re: My Dilemma
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by OzChick on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:57:49 AM AEST
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Pretty good poem, very expressive.
My advice? Live your life for you, you're the one who's living it after all.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: My Dilemma
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by n2dep2care on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:58:50 AM AEST
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How well I know this dilemma! Struggling through other’s expectations of you is always hard, but you have to be true to what you want, and who you are- it’s your life! Your words flushed over me with sad memory and feelings, I like that. Your poem is deep and meaningful for me, and for you also. I like the way you write with true emotion, and not being afraid to show it. Good job here. Well done!
Laurie |
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Re: My Dilemma
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:38:05 PM AEST
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| Ash, I have to agree with the other sisters here. You must live your life for you. Hope all works out. Peace, Laura |
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Re: My Dilemma
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by brew on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 10:25:00 PM AEST
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Ashley, Come on.........Its you we are seeing...what your typing..................You are you, what is to mask>?
I say that because I like you deep down. You are senstive, caring and kind hearted.....................Dont sell your self short...................EVER~~~~~~~~~~~~
I loved the write, yet I SEE ........YOU......something you can see, just let it happen.
Hugs
Brew~ |
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