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Inferno of Hate
Contributed by
Poetic_Influence
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Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 06:02:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Blazing inferno
My soul is on fire
As the hours go
The heat is so dire
This anger I feel
Taking me over
No way to heal
I feel like a rover
These hands could kill
These eyes full of pain
A need to fire at will
Is surrounding my brain
Hands squeeze the trigger
Pointing straight at you
Madness growing much quicker
A hate thats overdue
Sweat beeds pouring off my head
I could let it go
But I killed you instead
I watch the blood flow
So rapidly out of your head
Smile on my face
I am now complete
No evidence is traced
My heart has such replete
This is no closed case
And the thought is so sweet
That I am now a murderer
That no ones ever seen
Now when the ask if you've heard of her
Just say "Yea, Her name was Tiffani"
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Re: Inferno of Hate
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by PoeticLicense on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 06:43:44 PM AEST
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| I regret to say I cannot commend you on this one. What exactly does it accomplish? If you're writing to expel anger, know that this kind of writing does not help. You'd be much better off finding something that inspires you to write about when you're angry. |
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Re: Inferno of Hate
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by Thoren on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 09:20:39 AM AEST
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"I bust my b_lls, I break my back,
To come home to a sl_t.
You broke your vows, you dirty b_tch,
I'll kick you in the c_nt."
-M.O.D., 'Ruptured Nuptuals'-
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