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I encourage encouragement
Contributed by
Derpinguin44
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Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 01:31:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Will You be there for me? Tell me I am the one? Will You care for me? Or ditch me like Everyone?
Will You tell me lies? Tell me I am the one? Will You be there for the cries? Or drop me like Everyone?
Will You teach me what is right? Tell me I am the one? Will You be there to help me fight? Or hurt me like Everyone?
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Re: I encourage encouragement
(User Rating: 1 ) by lost_chadow on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 04:48:59 PM AEST (User
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I like this especially how you capitalized Everyone like the rest of the world is one character. If this is your old stuff, I'd like to see some of your more recent work. |
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Re: I encourage encouragement
(User Rating: 1 ) by lost_chadow on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 04:49:02 PM AEST (User
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I like this especially how you capitalized Everyone like the rest of the world is one character. If this is your old stuff, I'd like to see some of your more recent work. |
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Re: I encourage encouragement
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 07:19:52 PM AEST (User
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I know how you feel. I often worry that the people in my life that I care about will turn around and hurt me yet I get close to them, let them see what is in my heart. I don't know who to trust or who to turn away.
This is an AWESOME write. Keep writing!!!
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