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Notice Me
Contributed by
pisces101
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Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 02:59:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I thought Id be able to hang on.
I should have known that your love for me would pass.
I guess theres no changing feelings once theyre gone.
Im still foolishly living in the past.
When you used to notice me.
Seems you loved me when I wasnt so broken down yet.
I cant recall when or why,
But now theres nothing left.
Its not here tonight.
You dont notice me.
How was your day?, maybe youll ask back.
I undress right before your eyes, you dont even glance.
And I stare at you for hours, you never react.
Take a shower, but you dont take that chance.
You dont notice me.
I understand if you just dont love me enough.
Could you just pretend?
When I walk by you, try to look up.
Have a little mercy on the heart you were given.
Please notice me.
You no longer wipe the tears from my eyes.
Where do I begin with everything I must undo?
Im still living as if youre what keeps me alive.
Where did I go wrong in loving you?
Wont you notice me?
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Re: Notice Me
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:36:54 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Notice Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:40:43 AM AEST
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| Wow...a beautiful write you have here. So full of sadness and pure emotion. I've been there. Wonderful work. |
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Re: Notice Me
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by from_first_to_last on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 10:50:48 AM AEST
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| WOW. thats very emotional. i was about to cry.i luved it a lot. thats why i luv poetry cause its hard to express feeling when your talking to someone about them but when you write its like theres not enough words to describe how you feel |
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