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freedom of choice
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 01:26:09 PM in AEST
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i saw a disturbing picture today
of a baby that never made it's way
the blood in the picture created a sea of red
a sea of babies floating dead
at eighteen weeks his heart had a beat
and at only eleven he had hands and feet
his fingerprints were real but his identinty unknown
now he lies in a pool of blood and bone
there is so much pain in these words that i say
cause i just lost my unborn child today
we didnt choose to end its life
and it didnt die under the knife
we have the freedom to choose that is true
so for those who choose to kill i choose to say ***** you
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Re: freedom of choice
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 01:29:59 PM AEST
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| I am pro-choice, but I do see where you are coming from with this write. I am sorry for your loss. Peace, Laura |
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Re: freedom of choice
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by Jrtoews on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:53:33 PM AEST
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| Very powerfull poem i think its great that you expressed hoe you felt and i have a sister that lost a baby as well and i understand that there is a choice but people need to understand it is a living being with a hear beat very good job |
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Re: freedom of choice
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by EmSal on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 12:39:50 AM AEST
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| I can only imagine losing something/someone that was so part of you that you really wanted. I know of people who have been through this pain, even losing a child at 3 days old. Dreadful thing to go through and will be there for the rest of your life. So sorry for your loss. Excellent write though. Take care. |
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