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Another
Contributed by
JONTED
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Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 02:19:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Another empty page
In the story of my life
Not even a one liner
As love cuts me like a knife
Another uncertain day
No script to tell the pain
Even on the driest day,
My life is filled with rain.
Another broken heart
But who in fact will care
As I reach out for a hand
There is no one left there
Another tortured soul
Please forgive my many tears
But why does this happen now
After all these years
Another breathless moment
As I recall the times
When one day I was happy
And you and I were fine.
Copyright ©
JONTED
... [
2006-01-29 14:19:02]
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Re: Another
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 02:27:43 PM AEST
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Oh Jon..thank you so very much for doing this...
I love it.
Snogs
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Re: Another
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:38:22 PM AEST
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| I love this write. Wonderful, wonderful work. |
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Re: Another
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by Poetic_Influence on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:03:06 PM AEST
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| very good write |
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Re: Another
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:19:18 PM AEST
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A sad, deep and heartfelt write. May sadness and pain be washed away from ur life and the lives of those who are close to u.
*warm hugs*
~*sue*~ |
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Re: Another
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:27:16 PM AEST
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very well done
Shari |
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Re: Another
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by Summerwine on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 08:39:16 PM AEST
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| These words are all too true for so many of us Jon, very good. Thank you....Summer |
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Re: Another
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 09:35:09 AM AEST
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| Very heart felt write...thank you...mike |
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