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Collide
Contributed by
contralogicus
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Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 12:33:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Clouds will crack,
Brilliance in the sky,
Therell be no turning back
And please dont cry
When we suddenly collide.
Freedom forged
Asphalt road
Trees whisper
Signs blur.
Ill cross the barrier,
Grinding steel
Against cement.
Motionless
For just one moment,
Half-suspended in the air,
Ill say a prayer
When we suddenly collide.
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2006-01-30 00:33:56]
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Re: Collide
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 07:52:52 AM AEST
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An interesting piece.
i think the simplicity of it all hides the convoluted concepts, our minds cannot grasp. Some would say death is a life process, obviously the last, yet still a part of life?
This piece seems more figurative that physically literal.
Maybe i am disoriented, yet this piece to me seemed as though the message were about life's final process?
A thought provoking write. |
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