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War
Contributed by
Ice_Fox
on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 08:26:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Blood to give,
Let none live!
You will lose your life!
These are generals words
To cope with a soldiers strife,
Cast into the wasteland
Paved by anothers greed
Here we have our weaponry
And screamed orders to heed.
I am one, and meaning none
In army vast and wide
If I fall, in midst of all
None are at my side.
The blood it splatters widely,
In course of painful screams
To common beast, to say the least
A war is still unseen.
And now I fight throughout the night,
With sword,
With tooth,
With claw,
Anothers blood drops off my face,
Onto a mangled paw.
Terror strikes within my mind
As fallen beasts lay on the ground
Never to be with again,
Never again to make a sound
And the shocking hits me,
Tightening like a lynch,
The fact that I kill brethren
Without even a flinch.
What Ive been led into
I do not really know
As evil raises in my mind,
And anger starts to show.
I grasp my sword and cut and hack
Knowing nothing can turn me back,
As redness clouds my vision,
And excitement fills my mind,
I cross over the carcasses
That I have left behind.
My face is coated with the blood of many evil souls,
Dripping down into my mouth,
Burning my eyes like coals
The taste of it soaks into tongue,
Alas, control is gone
For now mental preparation
Shall not stay with me for long.
The primal rage of vermin old,
Built within my natural mold
Shall stay with me,
Eternally,
Never to relinquish hold.
As thought dawns upon
My aching restless mind,
The war will never seem to stop
Never to be left behind.
Set upon by fiendish wounds
And now I quickly fall,
My blood-choked vomit stains the snow
As dying ends it all
Copyright ©
Ice_Fox
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2006-02-01 20:26:30]
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Re: War
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by Jrtoews on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:04:59 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this poem it was very wel written, i like the portrayal of humans as animals cause that is was we are we are the most dangerous beasts of all |
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Re: War
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by Rumplestilskin on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 02:01:06 AM AEST
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| Nature is cruel. One may say that our creativity is what seperates us from the animal world. Perhaps, but then our facination with distruction would debase us even further than animals. For animals kill to eat, we kill for what? |
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Re: War
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 03:24:52 AM AEST
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| Intense write. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the great writing! |
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Re: War
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 01:13:48 AM AEST
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| This is a very powerful and beautiful poem. Great Job!!!! |
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