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Ostentatious Orgy
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 09:24:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Extra pair of hands
Place them on faces
Footprints in the sand
Washed by the tide in the evening
Eyes meeting eyes
A wall has risen in the median
Unleashed pleasure
Hazardous who you sleep with
A glance becomes a stare
An angel is delivered from amongst the molecules in the air
Depleting into the ceiling
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2006-02-01 21:24:17]
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Re: Ostentatious Orgy
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 11:24:31 PM AEST
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This is one of those writres that makes a person scratch their head a say, "hhhhhhhhhuuuuummmm".
U r very creative with the words.
huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: Ostentatious Orgy
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by brew on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 10:07:24 PM AEST
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Creative, no bleekness...it puts a look on life.....meanings, yet can they be composed.? A deep think for the reader
Brew~ |
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