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COMPLETE
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 06:59:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Fate has formed a puzzle,
love put it together
revealing passion, romance
an enigma, us two
Your very being surrounds me
enraptured by your soul I breathe
your breath, you cool my desire, im revived
by your lips
Dedicated love filled with passion,
shared obsession laying with you,
my sweet, showers of pleasure, eloquent
fanatises reveals sexual mist, tight
grasp of love, profound attraction placed together
tonight
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2006-02-02 18:59:28]
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Re: COMPLETE
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 10:47:18 PM AEST
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| I really lilked this. Very romantic. Nice work. |
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Re: COMPLETE
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by emystar on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 10:33:41 AM AEST
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A peice of heaven.
huggs,
emy |
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