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morning song 2
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 02:38:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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i crawl out my grave another new day dawns
the sun is shinning with pigeon song
wonders of the world just monsters of steel
missing a true beauty of natures feel
i lay on the grass in a blanket of warmth and light
feeling my soul rise everythings just right
children laugh dogs do play
everyones enjoying this lovely day
walking in feilds of brown coloured grass
feeling like this day should always last
but no flowers to smell that is whats wrong
but it is winter but that wont last long
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lostrelic
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2006-02-03 14:38:23]
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Re: morning song 2
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by moses on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 04:24:56 PM AEST
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Feelin' the poem, I've wrote poems like it before. Keep it up, love readin' ur stuff.
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Re: morning song 2
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by shelby on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 07:26:00 PM AEST
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no flowers to smell, ahhhhhh awaiting the flowers....
as usual a flowing, beautiful write. Your vivid detail and images makes this so lovely
Michelle |
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