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A Waste OF Skin
Contributed by
Fiona
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Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
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Frail, weak, a waste of skin
Competing with men is an unthinkable sin
Unqualified, unjustified
A piece of trash
A sex object for men to criticize, and bash
A flake, a *****
or just a good l**
But of course, Im a whore
So, what can I say?
I gossip, I cheat
Im great in the sack
I dont get hurt when Im stabbed in the back
Im worthless, Im selfish
I love to complain
If it wasnt for men
Id go completely insane
I exaggerate, I humiliate
I make accusations
The slightest thing makes me lose concentration
Lucky ME for being born!
To serve men, the "ultimate bearers of porn
A sex so superior, I should grovel, and bow
And accept that Im just a fat worthless cow
Who cares if they beat us
Who cares if they kill
We will hold nothing against them
We will love them still
My sister is pregnant, but thats okay
The ***** deserved it anyway
Copyright ©
Fiona
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2003-01-27 18:20:00]
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Re: A Waste OF Skin
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by Fiona on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 10:34:18 PM AEST
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I just wanted to clarify this poem a little bit..I let a few people read it at school and they totally took it the wrong way. When I am describing what "women" are, I am being very sarcastic. Some people didn't get that, they thought I was actually bashing myself, and bashing women. This poem is very one sided, placing the spotlight on men.
Oh yeah, the last line is from the man's point of view and that is why it is in " "
I just don't want to offend anyone....hehe...I have no problem with either sexes, I just thought it was a really interesting topic. Thank u for reading. Luv, *Fiona* |
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Re: A Waste OF Skin
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by Lia on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:53:30 PM AEST
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| well..at least you aren't vain..LMAO |
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Re: A Waste OF Skin
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:54:33 PM AEST
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| I understood the sarcasm - you expressed it very well - I really enjoyed this poem. Excellent write. |
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Re: A Waste OF Skin
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 03:11:02 AM AEST
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I think I would have liked this more if u were speaking from personal experience or if u actually felt that way. The truth is some men are like that. The nice guys like me dont get the girls. IN any case good poem
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: A Waste OF Skin
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by Fiona on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 10:24:38 PM AEST
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Oh, I was definitely talking from experience! I just didn't want to make it seem like ALL guys are horrible, because thats not true....Sorry about that. Thanks for the comments though.
*Fiona* |
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Re: A Waste OF Skin
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by merge on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 01:57:54 AM AEST
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Wow! Very impressed! I like the use of sarcasm to justify the means of the poetry. It has some nice shock value and sometimes that's what at statment needs. Luv ya babe!
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