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COMFORT ZONE
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:27:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Searching for my place
the place I fit in
understanding, love,
normality all these greet
me where I fit in
Pull me to my serenity
gravity take me to me
twelve steps left, or
could be right, lower
me gently count down from
twelve release me, comfortable
relief
I close my eyes, to dream
a soft spot at sunset gentle
breeze sitting beneath a tree
conversate with me, could this be
the spot I seek, to myself
here i fit in
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2006-02-04 23:27:32]
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Re: COMFORT ZONE
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 01:43:45 AM AEST
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| Well penned piece. I do understand the need for that comfort zone. I don't have OCD but I do suffer from bipolar disorder. My aunt has OCD, it is a struggle. Take care, peace to you, Laura |
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Re: COMFORT ZONE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 06:40:32 PM AEST
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You find that place let me know a beauty of a write very laid back yet revealing sincere emotions along with questions of the heart.
((((sweetoccasion29))))
Ben |
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