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Just to say goodbye
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 11:37:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Run it down to make it close!
What you've said, you said in circles!
Won't you please let us try to find out!
Run it downAway
Take ten paces and turn to your fortune.
You shot me down with your words.
All I hear is a gun explosion.
You shot me down with your words.
That day when the angels did sing you're leaving.
Denial was reaching the brink of breaking.
With my life wide open, there is change in the air.
I'm ripping my eyes out just to say goodbye.
For what it's worth, I've already begun contemplating what we've lost.
Can you leave the light for everyday?
Everyday that's passing
Walking backwards is the perfect goodbye.
A step seems to jetlag feet on a cold morning.
I packed my heart shaped suitcase in time.
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Re: Just to say goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 11:51:44 AM AEST
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| Yes, mates can certainly tear down each others spirits. Women want to show love and be loved, men want love and respect. Each day we must never forget to let the other person know how much we appreciate what they do and have done for us, another way of saying, I love you. Raquel Leah |
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Re: Just to say goodbye
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 12:52:56 PM AEST
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good imagery of the hurt we can cause each other in a break up...
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Re: Just to say goodbye
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 07:34:58 PM AEST
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This was a great write I liked the imagery of
you ripping your eyes out and walking
backwards both are interesting concepts. I
pray that you able to heal now and once
again an awsome write.
Bobo (Joel) |
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