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Poetry
Contributed by
raidne
on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 08:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Poetry
and the physical symptoms
of mental anguish
are spirals that encompass my body
as I drift from one place to the next
Poetry
is the frost forming
ahead of my mouth
as I breathe outwards
in the five a.m. winter air
Poetry
can be sweet water
on days of drought
when your skin has been burning
under intensive radiation
Poetry
like all things powerful
can hold captive
hearts and minds
with the mere whisper
of
words
Copyright ©
raidne
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2003-01-27 20:15:00]
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Re: Poetry
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by Lia on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:43:31 PM AEST
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| couldn't have said it better myself..this is beautiful |
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Re: Poetry
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 03:18:22 AM AEST
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Yes... I enjoyed this very beautiful indeed I feel a lot like the first stanza.
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Re: Poetry
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:02:00 PM AEST
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Yes, Poetry can truly be a great release for a troubled
spirit or a joyous soul. It is a celebration of life itself.
I Loved this.
Love,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob) |
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